The Heroes of Little Springs; Comment Section

Don't finish it tonight if it means you need to rush it, please. It will show and your work is great, especially if you don't rush it.

I'm not going to rush it. Though I am done for the night. I've got to think some things over.

Oh well, it gives me more time to work on the next chapter.

Yup. I'm just too tired to come up with anything at the moment. But I did get pretty far.

Sounds great! So does this one have more catching up or is it more like you first two chapters?

^ It's like the first two chapters.

Awesome, will definitely look forward to that.

I just have to proof read and then I'm done by the way.

Proof read what? You're working on something for school?

no, isnt this the thread where we were talking about the FF chapter and my chapter? i was saying im done with the draft and proof-reading.

Oh right, never mind.

posted it by the way.

and im working on the next part of the hero's thing.

Wow you're on fire! I'll get to posting the FF chapter a little later because I need to go do work. Haven't read your FF yet, but will do so later!

i wouldnt say im on fire but okay :p

im probably going to post the next posts for the RPs tomorrow. though, I have a question before I do: does it matter how long this arc is?

I guess it doesn't. By that do you mean it's going to be short or long?

Long :p

Well then, I don't mind!

Okay. I just wanted to make sure...cause...yeah.

"While you can never get rid of me, for death can never creep onto, it cannot say the same for you."

^ that, to me, implied immortality. and he said that on the roof to the banshee.

He didn't blatantly state it though.

Yeah but when I read it, I took it to mean he was pretty much saying he's immortal...i mean,what else could his statement mean? and, i had the banshee respond in accordance with that implication. just so you know. so, she does know. i just want to make that clear.

also, i split this off to the comments section just in case we need to discuss this further for whatever reason.

Right but when one hears of immortality, one often thinks of a being that can't be harmed. Not that they can't die but can't be or easily injured, which isn't the case with Crusader.

immortality is someone who can't die. whether or not they can be injured or die and come back to life is another story and just part of the 'rules' of said immortality. but when someone says they're immortal, that usually means they can't die and vice versa. im not entirely sure if that's what you're saying but that's how i've always thought of immortality.

now, im not necessarily saying the banshee knows the specifics of the Crusader's situation or to what extent. i really didn't want to give that away though if it's still not really clear then i guess i'll have no choice since i obviously did something wrong.

and whether or not she knows you're immortal and can foresee your death is not really as important as the 'main' part of the story. this is more of a subplot really.....

I always just assumed it meant the person couldn't be hurt/and therefore die. Not be hurt, die, and reincarnated (or something similar.) Whatever I guess there's all exceptions.