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Guess who's going to spam everything with Les Miserables videos because I saw it on Broadway the other day?
ME.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=I8WSysB5vKM
ME.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=I8WSysB5vKM
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Yeah sorry I was really busy yesterday and today, so I wasn't online at all. :P
I managed to get a lot of things done, I'm actually surprised.
I managed to get a lot of things done, I'm actually surprised.
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It's fine.
I still have to write my story :p
I still have to write my story :p
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Working on it now. I also have tomorrow......
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thanks, im going to need it. im just doing a quick job now just to get it done and then hopefully tomorrow ill proof-read it and make sure it's all good.
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How many pages do you expect it to be when it's finished?
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I just finished today. It's okay, not the best I want it to be but whatever.
It's currently 19 pages. I'll probably do the same thing I did with the story I just posted and wait to hear feedback before I post it.
It's currently 19 pages. I'll probably do the same thing I did with the story I just posted and wait to hear feedback before I post it.
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Is 19 pages what it's going to be or is that what you currently left it off on? I don't think making a continuation of a story is unreasonable, but it just sounds like you have a professor who is set in their ways.
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19 pages is what it's at. Though after getting my grade, I might go back and re-tweak things to make them slightly smoother. So it could be longer.
And she was okay with it being 19 pages. I just have to read the first 10 in class and the next story I write can be shorter because I wrote a long story this time around. So it's all good.
And she was okay with it being 19 pages. I just have to read the first 10 in class and the next story I write can be shorter because I wrote a long story this time around. So it's all good.
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Oh I forgot to mention that I did read your story, earlier today when I found some time. Overall it was pretty good. It seems like you were inspired Nausica, or whatever it's called. At least I vaguely remember planes and hunter pilots with harpoons, who were attacking winged animals, when I saw the movie way back. I think it was on Cartoon Network, when they used to air decent shows.
Anyways it was great, I'm not sure what your professor thought of it, but I think it's good. Did you have a guideline you had to follow? If so, what was the rule for the story this time? I know there was one essay where you had to make a personal story. Which you ended up turning into a fantasy or whatever lol.
So was this story supposed to be related to some life experience in some way?
Anyways it was great, I'm not sure what your professor thought of it, but I think it's good. Did you have a guideline you had to follow? If so, what was the rule for the story this time? I know there was one essay where you had to make a personal story. Which you ended up turning into a fantasy or whatever lol.
So was this story supposed to be related to some life experience in some way?
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Aw **** man I didn't even think about Nausicca but you're kind of right lol.
We didn't have any rules. Just write a fictional story that was roughly 5-7 pages. I only got the idea because there were those articles being posted about how the government is trying to make it so SeaWorld in California has to free their whales. And then I started thinking about how back in the day hunting whales was okay and yeah...idk I just kind of wondered what it would be like if we lived in a world where we were hunting whales but they lived in the sky instead of the ocean.
I got an A by the way :p
And I didn't write a fantasy for the personal essay, I just wrote it as if the ride was real :p There's a difference. XD
I actually think I'm going to submit that one to the Media Collision (the school's festival or whatever).
We didn't have any rules. Just write a fictional story that was roughly 5-7 pages. I only got the idea because there were those articles being posted about how the government is trying to make it so SeaWorld in California has to free their whales. And then I started thinking about how back in the day hunting whales was okay and yeah...idk I just kind of wondered what it would be like if we lived in a world where we were hunting whales but they lived in the sky instead of the ocean.
I got an A by the way :p
And I didn't write a fantasy for the personal essay, I just wrote it as if the ride was real :p There's a difference. XD
I actually think I'm going to submit that one to the Media Collision (the school's festival or whatever).
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That's awesome, hopefully you make it in!
Also whatever, I just wasn't sure if Reese was supposed to be you. Like maybe you were trying out for baseball and thought you could hit a jet as the ball was pitched. Then disappointment ensued.
Also whatever, I just wasn't sure if Reese was supposed to be you. Like maybe you were trying out for baseball and thought you could hit a jet as the ball was pitched. Then disappointment ensued.
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Oh.....
Yeah, no that ain't me. I care way too much about math homework :p
Yeah, no that ain't me. I care way too much about math homework :p
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So did you get your grade back for your almost twenty page essay?
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No! And I was supposed to get feedback before my next story is due Tuesday. Damn.
I don't know she gave me really good feedback (i.e. that the story was good) from what I read in class. My only issue is whether or not I botched the last 9 pages because I was rushing :p
I don't know she gave me really good feedback (i.e. that the story was good) from what I read in class. My only issue is whether or not I botched the last 9 pages because I was rushing :p
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Well I'm sure if you email your professor, they might give you more feedback about the remainder of the essay. Or maybe not. I mean it's not like you paid for the course or anything. And they might have actual paying students/courses to worry about first. Unless they're a volunteer professor who is only dealing with the free courses.
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that's not how the class works. I'm in a class where other students paid to take the class. So it's not like the professor is prioritizing based on whether or not they are getting paid. They are getting paid.
When you take the class for free, you are essentially enrolling yourself in a class that everyone else has to pay for. You get in for free because you're an alumni.
the professor is kind of scatterbrained so she probably just forgot :p i guess if i don't hear soon I can always email her but i'm like almost done with this last work anyway so....yeah.
When you take the class for free, you are essentially enrolling yourself in a class that everyone else has to pay for. You get in for free because you're an alumni.
the professor is kind of scatterbrained so she probably just forgot :p i guess if i don't hear soon I can always email her but i'm like almost done with this last work anyway so....yeah.
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I'd like to know why interesting shows are killed off half way through, but somehow manage to be aired fully overseas when the series itself was created by US companies.
Star Wars Clone Wars and Beware the Batman, just to name a few, were aired fully at other places. Or how Canada and the UK got the first half of the third season of Avatar back to back, while we had to wait god knows how long.
Almost seems like we have monkeys handling the television business. Plus, even when the US makes a decent animated series, we still don't get to see it first. Canada and the UK can cram it, I want to see it first.
Star Wars Clone Wars and Beware the Batman, just to name a few, were aired fully at other places. Or how Canada and the UK got the first half of the third season of Avatar back to back, while we had to wait god knows how long.
Almost seems like we have monkeys handling the television business. Plus, even when the US makes a decent animated series, we still don't get to see it first. Canada and the UK can cram it, I want to see it first.
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Because Cartoon Network is run by t*ats.
At least Nick learned from Avatar. They saw how popular and how pissy the fans got and they actually let Mike and Bryan get away with stuff they didn't necessarily want in Korra like the lead being a woman. Regardless of whether or not we like Korra, Nick learned its lesson it seems.
By the way, I didn't do Heroes because I had to start from scratch on my story that is due Tuesday. And I found out I'm working late Monday night. And tomorrow I don't know when I'm getting home. So, you know.
At least Nick learned from Avatar. They saw how popular and how pissy the fans got and they actually let Mike and Bryan get away with stuff they didn't necessarily want in Korra like the lead being a woman. Regardless of whether or not we like Korra, Nick learned its lesson it seems.
By the way, I didn't do Heroes because I had to start from scratch on my story that is due Tuesday. And I found out I'm working late Monday night. And tomorrow I don't know when I'm getting home. So, you know.
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It's fine, we all have our busy weeks. I'm going to be super busy as well anyway.
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Guess who decided to be an asshole and rewrite her story for the third time.
Spoilers: it was me.
But luckily it's done.
And it's totally inspired by the RP as if it were the characters in an AU at high school but I don't care. Or at least, that's how it started but then it became something else. I don't know, I guess I'll post it when I get the other story back.
Spoilers: it was me.
But luckily it's done.
And it's totally inspired by the RP as if it were the characters in an AU at high school but I don't care. Or at least, that's how it started but then it became something else. I don't know, I guess I'll post it when I get the other story back.
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lol that sounds...interesting. Or would had? What did you finally end up turning the story into?
So what were the three different versions about? Was the RP the beginning one?
Oh and I'll get around to doing the RP posts tomorrow morning probably. A bit tired from the busy weekend/weekday that it bled into.
So what were the three different versions about? Was the RP the beginning one?
Oh and I'll get around to doing the RP posts tomorrow morning probably. A bit tired from the busy weekend/weekday that it bled into.
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1st story was a play
2nd was a story about a girl who finds out something tragic, mopes around (all done comedically mind you) and then runs into a dude.
3rd story was the RP one.
2nd was a story about a girl who finds out something tragic, mopes around (all done comedically mind you) and then runs into a dude.
3rd story was the RP one.
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