4th wall? what's that?

Ok so there's a funeral going on. Did I lose you yet? I kid I kid...

Anyways, this all applies to the last post. Two strangers interrupt the ceremony. They are on a hill and shout to get the attention of the others.

Though their announcement is cut short after the hill sprouts up high, cutting off the two and the viewers from each other. So when the hill goes up everyone can't see them. They are confused as to what's going on.

Then out of nowhere a large blast erupts and a giant wave like earth bending attack torpedoes to the viewers. It hits the saluting line as many can't react in time. Confusion runs rampant. It then continues and hits the caskets where the carriers are and then hits the other saluting line.

So basically.

Two guys here.

_____________Saluting Line 1

ddddddCaskets
ddddddCaskets
ddddddCaskets
ddddddCaskets

____________Saluting Line 2

Make sense?

I really didn't think it was to hard to follow, but then again I also didn't think the banister sliding was that hard either.

the problem is that after i read something, the image i get in my head becomes different from the one that you originally intended. it becomes especially distorted when there's a break in between posts (like you post one on one day and then it takes a day or so for the new post to come). thats why i think i get confused. then again, i also tend to read things differently than what the author originally intended too. it happens to me all the time.

if we get confused, i think it helps when you make visual representations. because ive been imagining the scene like this:

///////////Saluting Line
Caskets ///////////Saluting Line

so somehow i got a completely different image in my head. and thats why i was confused. but now i know the set up so...yeah.

EDIT: and of course my little chart didn't work like i wanted it to =O

Yeah those stupid things won't keep the spaces you make. That's what I had to put a bunch of letters behind the casket.

Like both of these will be spaced the same.

gggcasket
casket

yeah......

Guys, I think it's time we quit COAL. They just attract danger.

You can't quit.

DAMN IT!

Besides, it's you guys that attract danger, not COAL. You're a danger magnet.

Am not =O. Lee's a danger magnet!

I am totally not!

*Thunder, lightning, and dark clouds envelop.*

...That's just a coincidence...

Yeah Lee, you're far to dangerous.

But Roister, what about the time in the tournament where Zakari--

NO! Lee's fault. I had nothing to do with it.

I think you're both danger magnets...

And Ai became a danger magnet when she fell for Ryuzaki.

I will throw you into the oven for saying that!

I'd like to see you try.

*starts fighting.*
*starts fighting.*

Haha!

I wouldn't be laughing...

Why? I wasn't there!

Yeah that's because you were in the woods getting---

We we're playing with fuzzy bunnies!

I'm totally confused. What were you doing in the woods?

Umm....playing in the mud?

Oh remember when we did that? Lee was there and Ryuzaki was there and you YOU were there! Good times...good times.

...........yes...yes I remember seeing as I brought it up......

Awww... Come on Z, i liked what i was thinking before, why'd you change it?

Because I doubt Lee would have liked it.

Why? "That's a pretty girly-- wait, that's Lee!" was perfect to describe the scream!

Tell him that yourself then, i'm off to get sugar-high.

...

Hey I'd yell to if a coffin was about to fall in a hole I was in.

You're just trying to make me feel better.

Yup.

Hey Ai! Look what your creator said!

Roister is good during battles and Ai well.....moving on =p.

LS!!! How could you say that about me!!

uhh cause it's true?

Oh it could be worse Ai.

she could have said "Roister is pretty tall and Ai well... ..moving on =p." or something along those lines.

Or she could had said..."Roister is pretty tall and good during battles and Ai well... ..moving on =p."

OR "Roister is pretty tall, good during battles, and he also isn't in touch with his inner blond. and Ai well... ..moving on =p."

That's a bit of overkill...

Oh, but there's no better kill then overkill!

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