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well, i certainly didn't expect that.

best. question. ever.

Well, I currently am not very fond of Ryuzaki. But since Ai has faith in him, I'll wait and give him a chance. Besides, I know Kazuya is watching him very closely.

She typically doesn't say bad things about people.

Unfortunately, Ai came to have that same trait T_T. You two believe in people way too much.

Yeah, but if Chikayume wasn't nice like that, she wouldn't have bothered to come to like you now would she?

....damn it, she's right =O

Hey pops.

What are you doing?

Oh me? Kazuya's my dad now.

What?

Yeah, since you're never going to RP as either of my parents, he's now officially my dad. It makes sense, we're both fire benders.

Lee...that's not going---

Oh you'll also like your other son! I'll go get him!

Well, I don't mind having more than one kid...so long as Ai is my favorite =D.

Kazuya, you can't have favorites...

Heck yes I can!

There are way too many kids! Help me!

You got yourself in this mess, you get yourself out.

Don't listen to Kazuya, of course we'll take everyone in.

This is starting to sound like Peter Pan....

That makes me Wendy.

Oh and I'm Mrs. Darling ^_^

which would make Kazuya...

*gasp* Mr. Darling/Captain Hook!
*gasp* Mr. Darling/Captain Hook!
*gasp* Mr. Darling/Captain Hook!

T_T

Psssh you can attack me all you want mister but Ai remains as the favorite child! I will fight every last one of you to defend her title!

Besides, he's dead already.

....

See Ai, I will defend you no matter what!

You won't be defending her when you learn the stupidity she has practiced in the beginning of the RP. Including the chapter I just read.

What do you mean?

I mean, Kazuya won't put up with the way Ai has been acting including the stupid stuff she just did. Like completely blowing Lee off and getting something to eat with Ryuzaki after all the previous events.

My god Ai, what is wrong with you?

You are.

T_T

lol sounds like you didn't like the chapter.

I considered changing it so that Ai trained with Lee, but that would mess up too many things. I finally decided to just keep it the way it was, but added more to it.

Every character was neglected by Ai even when they talked to her and bent over backwards for her. Even if it was your fault it was in the story, so I made it out to be like that.

Of course it kind of makes certain parts seem less meaningful (to her at least) but it also strengthened them...like for Lee. It showed how far he would go and that he was not all bark. Ai on the other hand is and will of course learn from her errors.

I have plans on making it that way with the later chapters.

well, Ai does learn her lesson since she does talk to people now.

Well...I didn't mean that, but yeah that to I suppose. I'll reveal what I'm referring to once that part of the RP comes to the chapters. It will be after the tournament stages though, so it won't be anytime soon.

I decided to change around a lot in this chapter. I edited a lot of parts completely. The only two parts I think I actually added were the beginning and Kozue and Roister's interaction yet again.

They were both (the members) MIA though most of this...so I needed to do something to keep them active and fresh in the story.

yeah, i liked their added scene together. it was easily my favorite part of the chapter.

though Ryuzaki's comment about getting a buzz was funny XD.

i can only imagine what will happen when Dumpling Man finds Karin sleeping in Lee's bed.

I knew you would like Ryuzaki's dark humor. "Give me my sake before I shot myself..."

I plan on giving more depth to Roister and especially Kozue. So stay tuned for those parts.

Also originally the beginning of the chapter where a proposal was made for the tournament, that and Yaiba's intervention were added and never intended. I just figured it built up tension so a new reader, if there ever were any, would become tense "Who is this guy and what does he want with Lee?"

If you didn't notice General Jin made an appearance in the beginning. I added that part in there just since we're at the part where he's been fully introduced to the audience (not really the cast)

I contemplated about just taking out Ai and Ryuzaki's barracks conversation, in the beginning (only because it seemed that every chapter with them, and every section, was Ai talking to Ryuzaki about her trust issues with him.

But I kept it only because there was only one part with it during this chapter. If there were more I would snip them...since nothing great is ever revealed.

I also made Karin more naive and confused about the effects and problems revolving the rock...Karin the member just wanted to be in the spot light too much. She made her character know everything and always had her extremely gaudy.

I changed her up since her introduction much like I did with Rosso. She's going to come out in her own way, not by a members fantasy self...and since she had her steal part of the Fire Nation's military items (the rock) there was no way they would just turn a blind eye.

That's why there are people investigating her and the reason why she tricked Lee into letting her stay with him. If she roomed and stayed with another person they would be less likely to strike. Even more considering he's in the tournament. They would have to keep a low profile.

...And that's about it!

Oh yeah! Badger Mole Tavern sounds like such a awesome name, if only they actually had something like that in the show.

that line was funny yet sad at the same time since it gives the audience the idea that Ryuzaki does not necessarily like Ai but merely feels guilty because overall he doesn't know whether or not he's doing the right thing.

yes, those characters need more depth.

i liked the beginning. I wasnt sure if the character was Jin or not so I didn't really say anything.

Ai constantly pesters Ryuzaki about trust because she does suspect Ryuzaki of something. she just doesnt think he's a bad person so she never suspected him of working with the fire nation. which is why i dont really get why Ryuzaki doesnt think Ai suspects something. Is he lying to Abarai or does he genuinely think Ai is a complete idiot? because this is the second time Ai has asked him if she is a pawn in his game.

i also like how Karin is still doing research. because if she knew everything about the rock beforehand, you'd think they'd have more back up in the temple considering the mass effects of it.

Badger Mole Tavern is an awesome name. We should send it to Mike and Bryan and have them put it in Korra =p.

Wouldnt that be weird if Cabbage Man's replacement was Dumpling Man?