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Post  Lee Thu Nov 11, 2010 10:52 pm

The music from before, I kind of figured that was the tracks you were using. They work perfectly, but that's probably because it's actually from the show and so I immediately match those together. You should probably also show it to someone who hasn't seen Invader Zim at all to see what they think.

It goes well to me though. The only thing is in the beginning, when there's several voice overs somewhat overlapping each other. Is a bit confusing, but if that's what you wanted, than don't worry about that. I don't know what you might've been trying to do there.

Also, I know I said it before but you should slow down the ending credits. That will get immediate attention and is an easy fix.

I just watched Dark Harvest today. I loved the kid who gets the hall pass stuck in his stomach. "Oh...I don't feel so good." *Thump*
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Post  Loyal Subject Thu Nov 11, 2010 11:00 pm

i think everyone in my class knows what invader zim is. so its kind of hard to ask any of them. maybe ill ask the teacher.

as for the scrambling, yes, that's what i was going for. i didnt exactly want it to be coherent but if you're an invader zim fan, you'd recognize the voices and the font and be like 'omg' XD.

i think i fixed the credits. i dont remember, i fixed the very last one anyway.

did you hear the voices distort though? i mean, not in the beginning when its scrambled, but in the main part of the trailer. its hard to work with this audio because the characters all go from extremely high to extremely low.
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Post  Lee Thu Nov 11, 2010 11:04 pm

Zim is a loud character to begin with. Dib's voice was a little lower than his.
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Post  Loyal Subject Thu Nov 11, 2010 11:10 pm

its all their voices. i think that might also be due to the audio quality though...

so....does it distort or can you not hear it? and yes, im pressing this question because it is important XD.
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Post  Lee Thu Nov 11, 2010 11:21 pm

I hear it, but it does get lower in sound during the second soundtrack.
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Post  Loyal Subject Fri Nov 12, 2010 11:17 am

yeah i fixed the second soundtrack's dialogue after i posted the video. i just wasn't sure if the line 'you will be sent to a planet so mysterious, no one has even heard of it' was distorting or not. that was the main one.

luckily my second trailer is going to have quieter music because its a horror movie trailer.

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Post  Lee Fri Nov 12, 2010 11:31 am

Well if you want to you can submit your newer version to youtube. I'll listen to it for you.
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Post  Loyal Subject Fri Nov 12, 2010 8:36 pm

yeah, im going to do that and then im going to send a link to my teacher because he was helping out some kids today. i didnt have it with me though at the time x_x.
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Post  Loyal Subject Fri Nov 12, 2010 9:19 pm

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MfgxkUN7PV8 new one.
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Post  Lee Sat Nov 13, 2010 11:48 pm

Never too late to get into the Christmas Spirit...also I just like this clip.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rBZTe_WQLvU
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Post  Loyal Subject Sat Nov 13, 2010 11:58 pm

i love that song XD
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Post  Lee Sun Nov 14, 2010 12:02 am

I like Spongebob's goofy dance the most.
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Post  Loyal Subject Sun Nov 14, 2010 12:09 am

lol yeah. the old spongebob was awesome XD.
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Post  Lee Sun Nov 14, 2010 12:15 am

That it was. Actually come to think of it, a lot of the first seasons of shows are great, but for some reason it seems they dumb them down. It's like the main characters get stupider.
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Post  Loyal Subject Sun Nov 14, 2010 12:18 am

yeah, thats why i stopped watching the show. they got rid of a lot of the innuendos


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LctTTKS81Ic&feature=related
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Post  Lee Sun Nov 14, 2010 12:22 am

Gir and Zim were the redeeming qualities of the show. It was great, but I never really cared for Dib.
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Post  Loyal Subject Sun Nov 14, 2010 12:27 am

Awww I liked Dib.
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Post  Lee Sun Nov 14, 2010 12:31 am

I mean he had his moments, but I found him kinda annoying at times with his paranoia.
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Post  Loyal Subject Sun Nov 14, 2010 12:37 am

i found the annoying aspect of him to be funny.
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Post  Lee Sun Nov 14, 2010 12:44 am

I liked how his big head became the portal through different worlds.

Dib: "...Maybe my head is big."
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Post  Loyal Subject Sun Nov 14, 2010 12:46 am

lol yeah.
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Post  Lee Sun Nov 14, 2010 8:28 pm

Oh yeah, not sure if you knew this or not, but Mike and Bryan worked on Invader Zim before it was canceled. It think it was Bryan who worked their the longest though.

Also I listened to the newest version. Everything sounds clear except for when Dib says They're here. That's still a little low. Other than that, it's nice. Oh yeah and the credits roll fast still, but it's your trailer. Nice job by the way.

I had to do a trailer before in one of my classes. I did it on Avatar.
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Post  Loyal Subject Sun Nov 14, 2010 8:41 pm

I thought I raised Dib's voice as loud as it could go. I'll see if I can go louder. As for the credits, I might just take one out and leave just two in.

I knew Bryan had worked on Invader Zim but I didn't know Mike had. That's pretty cool though =).

You should post the Avatar trailer you made =)
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Post  Lee Sun Nov 14, 2010 8:46 pm

I don't know...A part of me feels like it'll just be ripped off by viacom or some crap.
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Post  Loyal Subject Sun Nov 14, 2010 8:55 pm

oh yeah right...damn viacom.
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