The Heroes of Little Springs; Comment Section

oh so you're saying she should somehow force them to move on the ice? i think i get it....

You don't have to, just a suggestion. Like for example if someone was on slippery ice, moving would be difficult, but imagine someone punching them on the slippery ice.

yes...yes i see....

i will go do that now.

You don't have to, you can do whatever you want.

no no, it's a good idea. one that i have no problem in stealing.

okay, im done now :p

Now we're getting to more of the main parts of this arc.

Just for clarity, there's a giant creature/thing in the bank that just ripped out the front of it, correct?

No there was just an explosion so far, which blew open a hole. So it's like a dusty and fiery mess.

Oh okay

Right, nothing has exited yet. The only people outside currently are the remainder of the terrorists.

okay...ill post tomorrow. and if i forget, remind me :p

Hey it's cool, take your time. If you need to do it next week, then I don't mind.

Okay, I went back to read it and wait, what is this large shadow? Is it a person carrying a bomb or something?

You don't need to know that stuff, I left it obscure. The explosion was the main thing.

I dont even know how to respond to the giant thing tromping through the bank.

Well how would Quiver respond to it. It doesn't matter how you would, it matters how she would.

i dont know, thats just it. i mean, its a giant monster. i mean....i think she would attack it or try to. but im trying to be logical on HOW she would attack it.

Right, well at least you're contemplating how she would assess the situation.

Yes I am. but honestly im barely thinking about it at the moment. I've got to write like 3 scripts today lol XD

It's cool, school comes first.

I swear to god I am going to get to this eventually.

It's just my brain is so damn fried for having to come up with ideas for 3 classes. and by ideas, i mean like fully fleshed out stories.

It's fine, worry about school first. And good luck, you can do it.

No I can't :p

My problem is I put extra pressure on myself because I feel like I'm not doing as well as I could be in the class. And I think this is because of the paranoia I created for myself which is largely because of some sort of weird rivalry/overshadowing thing that appears to be occurring in the class.

Basically, I emailed the professor asking if I could do the Disney movie thing, right? And he said yes and that there was someone else that was doing something similar. Well, obviously I didn't get the message across very well (even though I literally said 'can I do a fairy tale adaptation like what Disney does') because he assumed I was going to be writing for a live-action movie. So now, I feel like my animated movie idea is getting overshadowed by the person that's doing a Pixar movie.

Of course, I'm pretty sure part of me has created this rivalry/overshadowing in my head. But then again, I made it pretty clear to this student that I love Disney last semester and as soon as I did that I feel like she kind of stopped talking to me.

And somehow my script has shifted gears closer to an anime movie in the midst of all this confusion. Which I don't mind writing but at the same time I fail to see how this is going to get Disney's attention. It's weird, you'd think I'd feel more comfortable with another Disney geek being in the classroom. And I don't. Disney fans are supposed to stick together :O

The end :D

Right...you're just over-analyzing things. Or not, but I think you are.

I know! And it doesn't help because I still don't know what I'm doing for the middle and end of my story. And by end, I mean the bits that are tied to the middle! UGH THIS IS SO HARD!!!!!!!!

Im seeing him tomorrow so I'll talk to him then about it. Cause seriously, I've been thinking about the middle section for like 3 weeks now and the only thing I got is what the fourth character's name is @_@