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Post  Loyal Subject on Sat Jul 11, 2009 10:46 pm

Okay, so today I have created/looked over some things I made and for some reason my excitement for them has caused me to be very hyper even though I am tired.

The first thing is this adorable picture of my kitty =D ....okay well it's not actually my kitty. I got this random thought to draw her as a person/cat thing....so I did....and it came out so cute (or maybe I'm just over excited because it's of my cat who I love so much =3) Anyway, here it is!

http://loyalsubject.deviantart.com/art/Natasha-129147027

Isn't she just precious (jeez, you'd think I was talking about an actual picture of my cat XD)

And the second thing (yeah I know, that pretty much just explained my crazy mood) is my Darkest Days fanfiction. It was one of those things where I just decided to start re-reading because I was bored and I kept thinking to myself "Wow, I wrote this? Really? It doesn't sound like me...." I think I should stick to darker stories cause I guess I have a better vocabulary with darker diction? no idea. then again, I did write this around halloween so that could explain the accurate sickness to it......yeah.......so yeah here it is. did i mention it was sick cause im warning you all. i cant believe i used the f word in this story =O

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3727689/1/Darkest_Days

and hopefully this will suppress my hyper attitude. i hope so cause id like to go to sleep some time tonight XD
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Post  Lee on Sun Jul 12, 2009 8:15 pm

Checking out your gallery, you're definitively making great improvements where you began. And that's all what art is about!

I really like your drawings on there, and the color is well thought out to.

This doesn't really apply to the drawing, but I remember this Ai and Ryuzaki comic strip about her freaking out and Ryuzaki says "Relax I just bought potato chips." or something like that...what happened to that one? Or the one about Ryuzaki and Ai's conversation about killing Rosso? Those were really nice strips.
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Post  Loyal Subject on Sun Jul 12, 2009 8:48 pm

oh i got them =D i can post them here now ^_^

yup about the art. though i wish i could still get over my thing where i cant draw the same thing twice. thats why everyone has two different shaped eyes XD
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Post  Lee on Sun Jul 12, 2009 8:50 pm

Yeah it takes a lot of practice, if you think you can draw the same character right away on a different piece of paper you'll find out it's harder then it looks.

That's why I practiced drawing the Avatar RP cast a lot.
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Post  Loyal Subject on Sun Jul 12, 2009 8:54 pm

^ i know that's why Ai looks different every time I draw her XD Ryuzaki is the only one that looks remotely the same and that's only because his design was based off L who I had drawn non-stop XD.

ok here's the first one (i still dont understand what Ryuzaki was talking about in this scene. Apparently, I completely miss interpreted the entire conversation @_@) ill upload the other one next.
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Post  Lee on Sun Jul 12, 2009 8:58 pm

Well I really doubt Rosso will bring it up since she's dead now.

Rosso was known as CrimsonClaw, which no one knew about. I realized you made a plot hole as Ryuzaki said "I will kill CrimsonClaw!" and then Ai goes "Why kill Rosso?"

The wanted posters were only in the Fire Nation, Abarai gave one to Ryuzaki. Realizing that she attempted to kill their Princess he had to stop her.

Ryuzaki never ended up killing Rosso, but did not extend a helping hand when it was needed in the collapsing cavern, only Lee did. Ai of course was all Ryuzaki mode, Razz so Lee and Karin escaping was nothing short of a miracle.
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Post  Loyal Subject on Sun Jul 12, 2009 9:06 pm




yay!


oh im sure that was probably the only thing i ever read in the RP and that is exactly why i dont do it. see Ai already screwed something up @_@. i better stop reading those things, i started to out of curiosity but now im just going to stop because ill ruin it.

i remember what happened now. i remember reading his post about killing the Crimson Claw and thinking to myself "who the hell is that?" and since it was at the beginning, i didnt know everyone's names and i didnt want to end up sounded completely stupid so i looked up everyone's bio and found it in Rosso's XD so i didnt read the wanted poster.

actually, Ai was going to help Lee but Ryuzaki admitted to her he needed help escaping. And then when she would have gone to help, Ryuzaki collapsed while the cave was still coming down @_@. she does feel guilty for not telling anyone Ryuzaki wanted her to die though.....

edit: gah the pic's so small. ill fix it hold on @_@

edit again: and now it doesnt fit on the page! gah, just click on the picture to go to the original file @_@
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Post  Lee on Sun Jul 12, 2009 9:36 pm

Mmmm Pork buns....if Ryuzaki didn't go traitor Lee and him would be good eating buddies, not drinking but eating.
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Post  Loyal Subject on Sun Jul 12, 2009 9:39 pm

yup ^^ but hey we still got lots of rping story....thing to go through so you never know XD. that could end up being a part of our epilogue =P
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Post  Lee on Mon Jul 13, 2009 10:11 am

They both are really good, the comic strip about take out is funny, but oddly enough keeps in character with Ryuzaki's chilled out behavior and how Ai always freaks out and pretty much blows everything out of proportion.

The other strip is more serious, but the dialogue you used, the way you spaced it and the expressions are really thought out. You should seriously add those to DA, but explain that Ryuzaki isn't a Death Note character.
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Post  Loyal Subject on Mon Jul 13, 2009 11:14 am

i was going to add the more serious one to DA after i colored it but it's been about a year since i wrote it (probably more) and it is still half colored in my folder =D. so yeah....maybe ill post the black and white one.....^^; i might redo the other one so it isn't as messy. that was the main reason why i didnt post it. and i need a bigger piece of paper to redo it or do the smart thing and draw it the long way instead of drawing it along the 8 inch side of the paper XD
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Post  Loyal Subject on Mon Jul 13, 2009 7:49 pm

Ok those two picks are on DA Lee!
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Post  Lee on Mon Jul 13, 2009 8:30 pm

Awesome that's great!
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Post  Loyal Subject on Mon Jul 13, 2009 8:51 pm

^ yup i gave you credit for the suggestion in the artist's comments =D
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Post  Lee on Thu Jul 16, 2009 1:05 am

I should get back to drawing again....been so darn busy with work. I'll have to do something tomorrow or this week/end.
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Post  Loyal Subject on Thu Jul 23, 2009 9:59 pm

ok i did a rough draft of the comic i drew. only because i realized after i scanned it i forgot to erase the pencil markings ^^. so thats why the coloring is all messed up.

Okay background story....maybe I'll draw it eventually. Ryuzaki was snooping around and found Ai's journal. He skimmed through it and came to an interesting entry about Ai mistaking a hotel for...Lady Jin's "Inn".
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Post  zfish9 on Thu Jul 23, 2009 10:16 pm

there are numerous comments i could make...
let's see if i can think of one that won't get me hit too... (Kudos to you if you can hit me though a computer)

anyway, it wouldn't surprise me if this had happened in the RP.
Ryuzaki: OW! fine then! your room then!
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Post  Loyal Subject on Thu Jul 23, 2009 10:19 pm

i know =p i dont care what comments you have. Comment away! I think it's funny, otherwise I wouldn't have drawn it =p.
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Post  Lee on Thu Jul 23, 2009 10:43 pm

lol yeah that gave me a good laugh. It's not only the idea and dialogue that makes it, it's the way you give them expressions and their body language.

This is both funny and nicely drawn! Good job! You should upload it to DA to if you haven't!

It's kind of like my Viagra Raid, if I didn't think it was funny I wouldn't of done it. I haven't read it in a while me thinks I'll pull it out and re-read and look at it. Oh or my tournament blooper comic! Gotta find them both!
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Post  Loyal Subject on Thu Jul 23, 2009 10:52 pm

im going to put it on DA once I fix it.
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Post  Lee on Thu Jul 23, 2009 10:53 pm

What are you fixing about it?
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Post  Loyal Subject on Thu Jul 23, 2009 11:02 pm

it's messy and colored in poorly =p. there's so many white spots XD
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Post  Shanghai on Fri Jul 24, 2009 2:12 am

I canna' draw...
I've tried, but the "Learn to Draw" book I have is just... well... too hard. (Beginners and Beyond! Pah!)

But... I can do tracings, and stuffs. I can do simple pictures, and some scenes (I have a picture that I drew for the game Red Alert),

So, what I was going to say is...

You'll never know what Zetta looks like.
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Post  Lee on Fri Jul 24, 2009 2:36 am

Well if you feel confiednet enough feel free to post your work here. None of us will tear it apart. We might suggest some beneficial pointers, but that's it.
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Post  zfish9 on Fri Jul 24, 2009 1:41 pm

as much as i would like to draw, i can't draw anything without screwing it up.

Thank you Dysgraphia... Rolling Eyes
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